ASSIGNMENT:
**6th grade-post a photo of your BROKEN ARTWORK (in process).
**8th grade-post a comment providing feedback/questions/suggestions towards a 6th grade project.
Hey Priya! We are supposed to comment on someones broken piece and I wanted to comment on yours. I love all of the colors you decided to incorporate into this, and I love how you get that 3D aspect! I think it could be really cool if you added some things that make it obviously broken. Right now I look at this artwork and I think happy and cheerful; I don't see anything broken about it yet. Maybe instead of having the elephant be one texture and color you could make it more mosaic to make it pop more! Also it would give it more of a broken feel. I think mosaic can be cool to give that sense of brokeness (I don't know if that's a word) with also adding a different layer to the piece. So far you are doing really well and I love it. Keep working on making it appear broken! -Grace :)
Hey Priya! We are supposed to comment on someones broken piece and I wanted to comment on yours. I love all of the colors you decided to incorporate into this, and I love how you get that 3D aspect! I think it could be really cool if you added some things that make it obviously broken. Right now I look at this artwork and I think happy and cheerful; I don't see anything broken about it yet. Maybe instead of having the elephant be one texture and color you could make it more mosaic to make it pop more! Also it would give it more of a broken feel. I think mosaic can be cool to give that sense of brokeness (I don't know if that's a word) with also adding a different layer to the piece. So far you are doing really well and I love it. Keep working on making it appear broken! -Grace :)
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